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Chapter 8
Overview
Bret, rattled by news about a desert cult and a spate of home invasions, goes with Debbie to a shadowy Melrose video space. Robert arrives with Jeff and corners Bret, prying about Susan and Matt, then turns overtly crude about Susan.
A barefoot cult-like intruder hiding in the dark bathroom scratches a girl before being detained and removed by police. Later, Thom shows up, and Bret witnesses Robert whispering to Thom, hinting at Robert’s growing influence and escalating threat.
Summary
Bret reads in the Los Angeles Times about the Riders of the Afterlife, a desert cult drifting into Los Angeles, alongside another patterned home invasion. Spooked at home, he jumps when Debbie arrives to take him to a nameless Melrose “space” that screens music videos in darkness.
Inside, Bret explores rooms of projected videos, notes the scene’s curated anonymity, and connects Lindsey Buckingham’s look to Terry Schaffer. He spots Jeff arriving with Robert Mallory, feels both dread and attraction, and hides in another room.
Jeff finds Bret, then leaves Bret alone with Robert. Robert probes Bret about Susan, implies knowledge of Bret’s rift with Matt, and presses why Bret didn’t “end up” with Susan. When Bret says he didn’t want to lose a friend, Robert counters with Matt’s loss, then shifts into explicit, degrading fantasies about Susan, driving Bret to leave.
Seeking the bathroom, Bret discovers a larger, darkened area and realizes someone is crouched inside whispering gibberish. He retreats and alerts staff. A blonde girl then stumbles out bleeding from a thin forehead scratch. Staff switch on the lights, subdue a barefoot, leaf-dusted hippie with talon-like nails, and call police, who remove the intruder as the girl’s bleeding stops.
Back in the space, life resumes; Bret contemplates transforming the incident for his novel. Thom arrives with Jeff, play-wrestles Bret, and they get swept up by Ultravox’s “Vienna,” projecting personal losses onto the song. In the final scene, Bret sees Robert whispering to an impressionable, high Thom during “Girls on Film,” sensing Robert grooming Thom toward his darker wavelength.
Who Appears
- BretNarrator; anxious from cult and invasion reports; attends the Melrose space; unsettled by Robert’s probing; discovers the bathroom intruder; observes Robert targeting Thom.
- Robert MalloryNew senior; arrives with Jeff; interrogates Bret about Susan and Matt; speaks crudely about Susan; later whispers to Thom, suggesting manipulative intent.
- Debbie SchafferDrives Bret to the space; circulates socially; helps with the scratched girl; her connections grant access to the venue.
- Thom WrightArrives later, coked and tipsy; play-wrestles with Bret; moved by “Vienna”; becomes receptive as Robert whispers to him.
- Jeff TaylorArrives with Robert; finds Bret; hovers through the bathroom incident; later hangs with Thom and Bret.
- JuniorDoorman at the space; greets Debbie; assists the injured girl during the bathroom incident.
- BartenderAlerts security, confronts and restrains the intruder, then resumes service as the space returns to normal.
- JonOperator of the space; in the back office; calls police and coordinates response during the incident.
- Blonde girlVisitor scratched on the forehead by the intruder in the dark bathroom; bleeding stops; declines ambulance.
- Cult intruderBarefoot, leaf-dusted hippie whispering gibberish; scratches a girl; subdued and arrested, echoing the cult menace outside.