Cover of You Like It Darker

You Like It Darker

by Stephen King


Genre
Horror, Fiction, Paranormal, Suspense
Year
2024
Pages
581
Contents

4. Danny Coughlin’s Bad Dream

Overview

Custodian Danny Coughlin dreams of a murdered woman's body behind an abandoned Kansas gas station, finds it really exists, and anonymously reports it, only to become the prime suspect of obsessive KBI Inspector Frank Jalbert. Despite no forensic evidence, Jalbert hounds Danny, leaks his name to a tabloid, and gets him fired, while his partner Ella Davis begins to doubt Jalbert's certainty.

Summary

Danny Coughlin, a high school custodian in Kansas, has a vivid nightmare in which he walks to an abandoned Hilltop Texaco station on County Road F and sees a stray dog digging up a woman's hand wearing a charm bracelet. The dream lingers, and online research confirms the gas station is real, in the town of Gunnel. Driven by curiosity and concern that the dog will further desecrate the body, Danny drives there on Saturday and finds everything exactly as dreamed, including the body. He covers the exposed remains with a trash barrel, buys a Tracfone burner at a Dollar General, and anonymously reports the location to the Kansas Highway Patrol.

Police trace the call quickly via the cell tower and security footage. KBI Inspectors Frank Jalbert and Ella Davis arrive at Wilder High and question Danny. Jalbert is fixated on Danny's guilt; Davis plays the more sympathetic role. Danny tells them about the dream, and willingly gives a DNA swab, which seems to disappoint Jalbert (suggesting the killer used a condom). They search his truck and trailer, taking his gun and a knife, and Danny hires Edgar Ball, a local real estate lawyer, for representation.

The victim is identified as Yvonne Wicker, a twenty-four-year-old from Oklahoma City. At a Saturday interrogation, Danny holds firm to his dream story, eventually surrendering his phone. Forensics finds nothing in his truck. Jalbert privately performs obsessive counting rituals and prays, convinced Danny wants to confess.

The following week brings disaster: Danny fires lazy Pat Grady; the freebie paper Plains Truth publishes Danny's name in connection with the murder, almost certainly leaked by Jalbert; and Danny is fired from his job under the pretext of budget cuts. Jalbert publicly ambushes Danny at the IGA wearing a KBI windbreaker, humiliating him in front of neighbors. Danny calls Davis at her daughter's birthday party to protest Jalbert's tactics and asks if Jalbert has been spouting random numbers. Davis, increasingly troubled by Jalbert's fixation, his weight loss, and Danny's apparent sincerity, begins to entertain doubt about her partner's certainty for the first time.

Who Appears

  • Danny Coughlin
    Thirty-six-year-old high school custodian, divorced recovering alcoholic, who dreams of a murder victim's location and becomes the prime suspect after reporting it.
  • Frank Jalbert
    KBI inspector with red-gray widow's peak, dusty avid eyes, and obsessive counting compulsions; fixated on convicting Danny despite lacking evidence.
  • Ella Davis
    Younger KBI inspector partnered with Jalbert; plays sympathetic interrogator but begins doubting Jalbert's certainty by chapter's end.
  • Yvonne Wicker
    Twenty-four-year-old murder victim from Oklahoma City, raped and stabbed, buried behind the Hilltop Texaco; identified by her charm bracelet.
  • Edgar Ball
    Local real estate lawyer who reluctantly represents Danny at his interrogation, riding a Honda Gold Wing motorcycle.
  • Jesse Jackson
    Black teenage summer worker at Wilder High; reliable, kind, and concerned for Danny when police arrive.
  • Pat Grady
    Lazy, tardy summer worker fired by Danny; his parents complain Danny threatened him.
  • Becky
    Danny's casual girlfriend in the trailer park; distances herself from him after the accusations, citing custody concerns.
  • Margie Gervais
    Danny's amicable ex-wife in Wichita; previously took out a restraining order against him during his drinking days.
  • Stevie Coughlin
    Danny's neurodivergent younger brother in Boulder with savant-like recall; lovingly calls Danny 'Danny-bo-banny.'
  • Susan Eggers
    Assistant superintendent who fires Danny under the pretext of budget cuts after pressure from Jalbert.
  • George Gibson
    KBI forensics head who reports Danny's truck is completely clean, suggesting innocence.
  • Darla Jean (DJ)
    Becky's nine-year-old daughter, whom Danny befriends and helps with flower planting.
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