You Like It Darker
by Stephen King
Contents
10. Rattlesnakes
Overview
Grieving widower Vic Trenton, staying on Rattlesnake Key, befriends elderly Alita Bell, who pushes an empty stroller for her twin sons killed by rattlesnakes decades earlier. After finding Allie dead and inexplicably inheriting her estate, Vic is haunted by the ghostly twins, who use the stroller to bind him as their new surrogate father. Recognizing the pram as their link to the world, Vic drowns it in Daylight Pass, freeing himself and glimpsing his own long-dead son Tad across the water on a restored Duma Key.
Summary
In July 2020, seventy-two-year-old retired adman Vic Trenton, recently widowed, is staying at his old friend Greg Ackerman's McMansion on Rattlesnake Key, Florida, to grieve his wife Donna's recent death from cancer. He meets neighbor Alita 'Allie' Bell, an elderly woman who pushes a double stroller containing only shorts and shirts representing her twin sons Jacob and Joseph, who died from rattlesnake bites in the early 1980s. Vic learns from Greg and later caretaker Mr. Ito how the boys wandered into a snakepit, prompting a massive 'snake hunt' that eradicated the rattlers by burning them at the Key's northern point. Allie brings Vic cookies, and he indulges her belief in her invisible children. Decades earlier, Vic and Donna had lost their own four-year-old son Tad to dehydration in a hot car besieged by a rabid St. Bernard; they divorced, then reunited and remarried before her cancer death.
One morning Vic finds Allie dead by her mailbox, being torn at by buzzards. The autopsy confirms a heart attack. A handwritten will leaves her entire estate—worth millions—to Vic, witnessed by her landscaper. Deputy Andy Pelley (Super Gramp) suspects Vic of foul play and orders him to stay on the Key. The stroller mysteriously reappears at Greg's house repeatedly, with different shorts and shirts on it. Vic begins experiencing hauntings: squeaky wheels in the night, shadows, a vision of the bathtub filled with rattlesnakes, and finally seeing the twins as grotesque adult bodies with bloated, snakebitten children's heads in the guest bed. Their thoughts—'see us, roll us, dress us'—invade his mind, demanding he take Allie's place as their caretaker.
Vic realizes the twins, not Allie, engineered his entrapment, choosing him as their next surrogate parent. He attempts to summon his dead son Tad at the gazebo and finds the snake pole moved with 'PR' scratched into the floor—a clue pointing to the pram as the link binding the twins. Dressed against snakebite, Vic pretends to take the twins for a walk and pushes the stroller to the Key's northern shell beach, fighting off real and phantom snakes and visions of fire. He flings the stroller into the whirlpool of Daylight Pass, where it sinks and the twins' shrieking presence vanishes. Across the pass, he glimpses Duma Key restored, with a tall man—seemingly grown-up Tad—waving to him.
The toxicology clears Vic, the inquest closes, and after probate he inherits Allie's estate, donating most to a food bank. Writing in 2023, he reveals the county is planning to reclaim Duma Key by closing Daylight Pass, which will eventually unearth the sunken stroller. Vic prays the twins are truly gone—and that they have no interest in him if they are not.
Who Appears
- Vic TrentonSeventy-two-year-old retired adman and narrator, twice widowed and grieving, who battles ghostly twins haunting him through a stroller.
- Alita 'Allie' BellElderly neighbor who pushes a stroller for her long-dead twin sons; dies of a heart attack and leaves her estate to Vic.
- Jacob and Joseph BellAllie's twin sons, killed by rattlesnakes around age four; vengeful ghosts who try to bind Vic as their new caretaker via the stroller.
- Andy PelleySemi-retired deputy 'Super Gramp' who investigates Allie's death, suspecting Vic of coercing her into the will.
- Greg AckermanVic's wealthy ad-agency friend who lends him the McMansion on Rattlesnake Key; provides backstory on the snakes and Mrs. Bell.
- Donna TrentonVic's late wife, recalled in flashbacks; died of cancer after their reconciliation, having seen grown-up Tad at her death.
- Tad TrentonVic and Donna's son who died as a child of dehydration; his apparent spirit aids Vic by leaving a clue scratched on the gazebo floor.
- Mr. Peter ItoGreg's Japanese-American caretaker who recounts the twins' deaths and the great snake hunt of the early 1980s.
- Officer P. ZaneCounty deputy who responds to Allie's death and later informs Vic of the autopsy results.
- Officer D. CanavanYounger deputy who accompanies Zane, videotaping the scene of Allie's death.
- Nathan RutherfordAllie's longtime lawyer who handles probate of her unusual will leaving everything to Vic.
- Jim MorrisonElderly swing-bridge tender who shares his own ghostly experience of seeing his dead wife after her passing.