Margo's Got Money Troubles
by Rufi Thorpe
Contents
Chapter Twenty-Four
Overview
Margo apologizes to Shyanne and announces plans to quit OnlyFans, but learns Kenny—pushed by Shyanne—called CPS on her. Furious, Margo cuts her mother off. Back home, Ward emails Dr. Sharp’s 730 report recommending Margo retain full legal and physical custody, with Mark granted weekly visitation and support obligations, easing the custody threat.
Summary
Margo arrives at Kenny and Shyanne’s condo to apologize and declares she’s quitting her account and pursuing real estate. Shyanne is icy but warms while showing off a new Labrador puppy and enthusing about Margo’s career shift, even inviting Margo inside for an energy drink and styling plans.
Shyanne blurts that CPS’s visit was a “wake-up call,” revealing Kenny initiated the report—and that she went along. Margo, terrified she could lose Bodhi, confronts Shyanne for masking judgment as concern. The argument escalates, and Margo tells Shyanne to stay out of her life before leaving with a crying Bodhi.
At home, alone while Jinx apartment-hunts and Suzie is in class, Margo receives an email from Ward containing Dr. Sharp’s 730 evaluation. The report finds Margo psychologically fit, praises her parent–child interactions, notes the clean home observation, and recommends she retain full legal and physical custody, with Mark receiving optional weekly visitation and paying child support for a year.
Relieved and elated, Margo tends to a cheerful, well-rested Bodhi and takes pride in being deemed “optimal.” She realizes that if Shyanne and Kenny called CPS, Mark likely did not, subtly shifting how she views the conflict and strengthening hopes of avoiding court based on the favorable evaluation.
Who Appears
- Margo MilletNarrator; seeks reconciliation with Shyanne, learns CPS was Kenny’s call, severs ties, and receives a 730 report granting her full custody.
- ShyanneMargo’s mother; initially frosty, admits Kenny called CPS and she complied; clashes with Margo over judgment and loyalty.
- BodhiMargo’s infant son; present during the confrontation and later a source of comfort and joy at home.
- KennyShyanne’s husband; offstage but revealed to have reported Margo to CPS; new owner of a Labrador puppy.
- WardMargo’s attorney; emails Dr. Sharp’s 730 evaluation recommending Margo retain full custody.
- Dr. SharpCourt-appointed evaluator; report deems Margo psychologically fit and recommends full legal and physical custody.
- Mark GableBodhi’s father; requested 730; report recommends only weekly visitation and child support obligations.