Cover of The Incandescent

The Incandescent

by Emily Tesh


Genre
Paranormal, Fantasy
Year
2025
Pages
432
Contents

Chapter Sixteen. The Lake

Overview

Walden and Mark conduct a rainy boundary sweep at the lake, creating and entering a portal to survey the adjacent demonic plane. They find it empty by the water but strongly imprinted by the school’s grounds. Mark proves skilled, Walden tempers her bias, and Chetwood’s warding systems are tested and affirmed.

Summary

On a rainy Sunday, Dr Walden eats a meagre staff lunch and chats with Todd, who worries about funding his great-nephew’s budding magical talent and declines Walden’s suggestion of adult studies. Walden reflects on inequities in access to magical education and on Laura Kenning’s absence.

Walden meets Mark Daubery at Reception, banishes an imp from the keypad, and notes the unusual uptick in minor possessions. They plan a boundary-to-core sweep in the rain. Despite his showy arrival, Mark accepts a school umbrella and follows Walden toward the rugby pitches and lake.

Seeking a liminal site for a portal, Walden chooses the jetty at the lake—the edge between school property and public water. Mark, unexpectedly capable, evokes a clean, arched portal. Walden reins in her skepticism and professional resentment, recognizing she partly resents Mark for not being Laura.

Walden steps through first into a vast, pastel-grey demonic plane: empty, waterless, and inhospitable to lesser demons. When Mark tries to re-enter the school side, the wards repel him; Walden provides a guest lanyard keyed with her spellwork, explaining the system deters human threats as much as demons.

Crossing the boundary with proper credentials reshapes the plane into vivid, abstract “grass” and distant, echoing rugby—an imprint of Chetwood’s history and use. Walden and Mark discuss why rowing leaves little echo across the boundary and note how institutional memory shapes the plane. Mark muses about his younger self; Walden reads the calculated charm beneath his schoolboy persona.

Who Appears

  • Dr Saffron Walden
    Deputy head and magician; leads a rainy boundary sweep, opens/enters the portal, tests wards, and reflects on bias and inequity.
  • Mark Daubery
    External reviewer; proves adept at evocation by creating the portal, tests security, and collaborates on the planar survey.
  • Todd
    Longtime staffer; discusses boilers and a great-nephew’s magical ‘fizz,’ highlighting access and bursary concerns.
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