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Overview
Tonner Freis is killed by Soft Lothark guards after revealing their clandestine, food-borne communication system. A Rak-hund intervenes and is destroyed by a caustic defense, forcing Dafyd to de-escalate, conceal the discovery, and reframe the incident as a misunderstanding.
In shock, Dafyd leans on Jellit, then initiates a tentative alliance: Humans and the Deep Lothark can help each other, hinting at a crucial new factional bridge.
Summary
Tonner Freis begins his day checking the artificial-gestation "lamb sacks," privately acknowledging he engineered Else’s child. When reminded of a meeting with Dafyd Alkhor, Tonner scrambles for assay data and decides to showcase a side project to impress.
Meanwhile, Dafyd oversees Jellit Kaul’s deep dive into the Carryx archive, learning of vast, millennia-spanning wars and living-like "void tendrils" used for reconnaissance. Uuya Tomos and choreographer Ver Cannedan brief Dafyd on Carryx body-language cues and a strategy using armband-like signals to de-escalate conflicts.
During the meeting, Tonner presents outdated assay results, then reveals his discovery: the Soft Lothark pass dense information via edible "nubblies," a private, hard-to-intercept channel. As he speaks, two Soft Lothark guards abruptly attack and kill him. Dafyd’s Rak-hund counters, but a fallen Lothark bursts caustic fluid, and the surviving Lothark kills the Rak-hund.
Frozen between exposing the secret and ensuring his survival, Dafyd nearly files a report revealing the Lothark method, then erases it. He reframes the incident to onlookers as a tragic misunderstanding caused by the Rak-hund’s misinterpretation. In shock, he returns to Jellit, accepts comfort but rejects intimacy, and steadies himself.
Composing a formal notice of Tonner’s death, Dafyd instead sends a simple overture: Humans and Soft Lothark can help each other. Meeting a Lothark privately (without the Carryx half-mind), he receives a crucial modification—Humans and the Deep Lothark can help each other—signaling a covert, cross-moiety alignment that could reshape their standing under the Carryx.
Who Appears
- Dafyd AlkhorLeader of the human moiety; averts scandal after Tonner’s death and initiates a covert alliance with the Deep Lothark.
- Tonner FreisBiologist overseeing gestation; secretly Else’s child’s father; discovers Lothark food-borne messaging; killed by Soft Lothark guards.
- Soft Lothark (guards)Alien guards who kill Tonner; one dies releasing caustic fluid; surviving guard accepts a discreet human–Deep Lothark cooperation.
- Jellit Kaul (the spy)Archive navigator; reveals Carryx history, wars, and void tendrils; comforts Dafyd, briefly crosses a boundary.
- Uuya TomosAdvisor; backs movement-study diplomacy; urges Dafyd’s focus on nursery curriculum and de-escalation strategies.
- Ver CannedanChoreographer studying Carryx cues; identifies poses to de-escalate and insights from Emberi about aggression markers.
- Llian AndermusTakes command after the killing, controls the scene, and supports Dafyd’s narrative of a misunderstanding.
- Rak-hundDafyd’s lethal guardian; attacks the Lothark, then is destroyed by the Lothark’s caustic death response.
- BrunTonner’s assistant; flags meeting timing and helps prompt Tonner’s decision to present the side project.