Contents
Chapter One
Overview
Lily and nine women awaken in a decaying yet luxurious desert compound, explore the grounds, and ready the house while testing boundaries under strict show rules. Social dynamics crystallize around Candice’s authority and two emerging cliques. Anxiety mounts as the boys are delayed, until they finally arrive the following morning.
Summary
Lily wakes in a freshly cleaned, windowless bedroom in the compound and meets Jacintha. They explore the house—tidy bedroom, messy dressing room, luxurious doorless bathroom, trashed living room with a blank big screen—and a hot, well-stocked but filthy kitchen. Outside, they find Susie by the pool and then Candice, before locating all ten girls.
The group cools off in the pool and informally sizes each other up. Candice asserts quiet authority, prompting a discussion about preferred types of men, while the women carefully avoid breaking rules forbidding talk of the show or outside lives. A disembodied house voice warns Melissa when she slips, confirming active surveillance and enforcement.
They clean the house, speculate about prior occupants, and ready themselves in borrowed clothes and sparse makeup. Alliances begin forming: Lily bonds with Jacintha; many gravitate toward Candice. That night they dine outside, trade cautious small talk, and go to bed with the living room screen still dark, awaiting the boys.
The next morning brings no arrivals, heightening anxiety. Lily’s solitary early walk and breakfast draw Mia’s suspicion, but Jacintha defuses it. The day is spent cleaning, sunbathing, swimming, and playing ping-pong; Jacintha worries about racial dynamics in casting. The group quietly bifurcates into two cliques, with mild cattiness surfacing, while Susie remains buoyant.
They rig a sheet for bathroom privacy, eat tacos, tend sunburns, and struggle through constrained conversation and restlessness. After a fitful night, the boys finally arrive the following morning, setting the stage for the show to truly begin.
Who Appears
- LilyNarrator; explores the compound, bonds with Jacintha, navigates early group dynamics and anxiety while awaiting the boys.
- CandiceMagnetic leader figure; commands attention, guides cleaning priorities, sets tone on rules and types of men.
- JacinthaPragmatic and kind; cleans, worries about casting bias, befriends Lily, improvises a bathroom curtain.
- MiaBlunt and competitive; complains about equipment, suspicious of Lily, alternates cattiness with helpfulness.
- SusieCheerful and naive-seeming; discovered by the pool, brings enthusiasm and charm, unconcerned by topic limits.
- EloiseFriendly early on; races in the pool, helps clean, later sits with the quieter clique.
- BeccaQuiet, shy, smallest of the group; values kindness and suggests turning in early to hasten boys’ arrival.
- VanessaBuxom and practical; defends house equipment, aligns with the quieter upstairs-cleaning group.
- MelissaAccidentally reveals personal info; receives a warning from the house voice, later keeps to quieter group.
- SarahAthletic with toned abs; stays with the quieter group during cleaning and meals.
- House voiceDisembodied enforcement; issues a clear warning about prohibited personal disclosures.