The Locked Tomb, #3
Nona the Ninth
by Tamsyn Muir
Contents
John 1:20
Overview
John completes his account of the apocalypse, revealing that the FTL evacuation was a betrayal by the wealthy and that his desperate attempt to stop it became worldwide nuclear annihilation. In the chaos, John discovers souls, touches the vast soul of Earth, consumes mass death, creates a body for that soul, and becomes God.
The chapter reframes John’s divinity as an act of grief, vengeance, panic, and violation rather than salvation. It also clarifies the dreaming listener’s identity and trauma: John did not merely save or love Earth, but hurt and remade it into Alecto.
Summary
In the dream, John and the dreaming listener move through the flooded, ruined compound where John’s followers once made barricades. John raises skeletons to clear debris, finds canned peaches in the wrecked kitchen, and begins explaining the final days before Earth’s evacuation.
John says his group discovered that the FTL evacuation was a fraud: the trillionaires had converted wealth into material resources, fabricated passenger manifests, and planned to abandon most of humanity. After John’s group warned their government, the evacuation schedule accelerated from months to days. Because John had not yet learned how to find or use the soul, he chose to stall the launch by threatening Pan-Euro’s orbital gate access with a suitcase nuke and, through a puppeted dead politician, wider nuclear retaliation.
G— carried the armed nuke as a dead-man’s switch, while John’s friends reacted with horror to the escalation. C— and N— married in the compound amid the crisis, but the moment quickly collapsed into conflict. Armed ex-cultists turned against John, took hostages, and attacked the building, forcing John’s followers to build the barricades seen in the dream.
Overwhelmed by negotiations, the attack, the launch countdown, and his friends’ anger, John locked himself in a bedroom. The nun came to him with P—’s gun, prayed, and shot herself so John could witness a soul at the instant of death. John finally perceived the human soul, but through it he also perceived the vast, screaming presence of the dreaming listener: the soul of Earth.
As fighting spread through the compound, John collected the souls of the dying, including his friends. After G— was the last survivor, John stopped G—’s heart, triggering the nuke, then used the puppeted politician to begin nuclear war. John consumed the deaths of humanity, reached for Earth’s soul, hurt it, partially incorporated it into himself, and made a body for it from his blood, bone, vomit, and earth.
John says that by hiding himself in Earth’s soul and Earth’s soul in himself, he became God, but it was still not enough. John destroyed the planets and satellites while trying to reach the fleeing ships, but most of the FTL fleet escaped beyond his reach. At the end, John recalls that the newly embodied Earth accused him of repaying its choice with horror, called itself a hideousness, asked where the people had gone, and still told him it loved him.
Who Appears
- JohnNarrates the apocalypse, triggers nuclear war, consumes death, creates Alecto, and becomes God.
- The dreaming listener / Earth’s soulWitnesses John’s confession and is revealed as the vast soul John hurt and embodied.
- The nunPrays for John, then shoots herself so he can perceive a soul at death.
- G—Carries the armed suitcase nuke as John’s dead-man’s switch in the final standoff.
- M—Discovers the evacuation fraud, challenges John’s escalation, and dies trying to protect him.
- A—Supports stopping the ships and dies beside John during the compound massacre.
- C—Marries N— during the crisis and condemns John’s vindictive desire for punishment.
- N—Marries C— and warns John that his plan will kill millions for nothing.
- P—Owns the gun the nun uses and later tells John to run before dying.
- Ulysses and TitaniaSilent companions with John in the bedroom when the nun enters.
- Armed ex-cultistsTurn against John’s group, take hostages, assault the compound, and spark the massacre.