Knockemout, #3
Things We Left Behind
by Lucy Score
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Overview
Sloane retreats home to grieve in her father’s study and is reminded of Simon’s kindness when Allen, a law student he mentored and funded, visits. Naomi, Lina, Stefan, and Jeremiah descend with food and tequila, refusing to let Sloane be alone. Amid comfort and banter, Sloane admits she wants a family, agrees to try dating apps, and proposes a community legal-aid initiative using her inheritance. Stefan quietly considers moving in with Jeremiah, hinting at deepening relationships around Sloane.
Summary
Sloane returns home from the funeral, sheds Lucian’s coat, and seeks solitude in her late father’s study. Surrounded by Simon’s lamp, notes, and mementos, she finally breaks down, voicing how permanent her loss feels. The doorbell interrupts: Allen Upshaw, a Georgetown law student, arrives to pay respects.
In the kitchen, Allen explains how Simon mentored him after teenage mistakes, guided his scholarships, introduced him to a professor, and personally filled his first-year tuition gap. He shares that his mother is in prison and that Simon and Karen had planned to attend his May graduation. Comforted by Simon’s legacy, Sloane sends Allen off into the snow.
Naomi and Lina, dispatched by Lucian, show up with margaritas and pizza, refusing to leave Sloane alone. After a long shower, Sloane joins them; Stefan and Jeremiah also arrive. The group teases out the origin of Lucian’s luxury coat. Conversation shifts to Sloane’s future: she blurts she wants a family, weighing partner-first versus baby-first, and agrees to try dating apps with her friends’ help.
They outline what Sloane wants in a partner—kind, funny, generous, good with kids and books, and great in bed—while the group banters. Sloane then pivots to Simon-adjacent purpose: using her inheritance to seed a free legal-aid initiative. Naomi and Lina pledge support, and Stef reluctantly agrees to contribute.
As they settle in, Stefan confides he’s considering moving in with Jeremiah but is anxious about broaching it. The evening closes with warmth, teasing, and food, Sloane held by friends as she mourns and tentatively reimagines her future and Simon’s legacy.
Who Appears
- Sloane WaltonGrieves in her father’s study, hosts friends, admits she wants a family, agrees to dating apps, proposes a legal-aid initiative.
- Allen UpshawGeorgetown law student mentored and funded by Simon; visits to pay respects; mother is in prison; graduates in May.
- Naomi WittArrives with comfort and margaritas; supports Sloane’s dating plan and legal-aid idea; organizes notes.
- Alina (Lina) SolavitaInsists Sloane not be alone; offers to help fund and organize legal aid; teases and advises about dating.
- Stefan LiaoAdds humor and dating-app help; agrees to contribute to legal aid; privately considers moving in with Jeremiah.
- JeremiahBrings pizza and fresh margaritas; offers playful support; partner to Stefan, subject of moving-in discussion.
- Meow MeowSloane’s cranky cat; briefly accepts affection, adding domestic normalcy amid grief.