Knockemout, #3
Things We Left Behind
by Lucy Score
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Overview
Lucian and Sloane arrive separately at Knox and Naomi’s for dinner and immediately clash. To force civility, Knox straps them to TENS units, turning dinner into painful chaos that alarms Naomi. Stepping outside, Lucian and Sloane acknowledge their destructive pattern and agree to a pragmatic truce with boundaries to protect the group’s harmony.
Summary
Lucian arrives at Knox and Naomi’s home for dinner, reflecting on childhood memories and the complicated expectations added by Naomi and Lina. Sloane pulls in, and the mutual hostility resurfaces immediately. Anticipating conflict, Knox presents TENS units and insists they wear them to behave or leave, warning Naomi is worried and he won’t host double social calendars.
Reluctantly, both agree, lured by tacos and pressured by Knox. At the table, Waylay controls the devices. Banter between Lucian and Sloane escalates into competitive goading about pain tolerance. Shocks intensify; both double over in pain, drawing attention from the family. Naomi grows suspicious and alarmed as chaos erupts, while Waylay, Lina, and Nash strategically exit to fetch dessert and reduce tension.
After ripping off the electrodes, Lucian steers Sloane outside. In the cold, they confront their pattern: every interaction devolves into juvenile sniping that disrupts the group. Acknowledging shared responsibility, they agree to a truce designed for the others’ sake—no direct interaction during group events and, when necessary, staggering attendance to avoid each other. They also agree to handle any lapses privately rather than publicly.
As they seal the agreement with a handshake, Lucian lights a cigarette, privately reframing it as a reward rather than a crutch. Both recognize the fragility of their ceasefire and the damage they’ve already done to each other, then reenter separately to let the family enjoy the evening without further drama.
Who Appears
- Lucian RollinsPOV; clashes with Sloane at dinner, endures TENS prank, initiates an armistice with strict boundaries.
- Sloane WaltonArrives bristling; trades barbs with Lucian, withstands TENS shocks, agrees to a pragmatic truce for the group.
- Knox MorganHosts dinner; forces civility by strapping them to TENS units to stop their feud and protect Naomi’s peace.
- Naomi MorganConcerned hostess; senses chaos at the table and reacts when she learns guests are being electrocuted.
- WaylayControls the TENS units; polices their tones and exits to defuse Naomi’s suspicion.
- Lina SolavitaDiverts Naomi with wedding talk; fetches cobbler to help de-escalate the scene.
- Nash MorganObserves with lawman humor, then helps shepherd dessert and reduce the tension.