Cover of The Raven Scholar (The Eternal Path Trilogy, #1)

The Eternal Path Trilogy, #1

The Raven Scholar

by Antonia Hodgson


Genre
Fantasy, Mystery
Pages
680
Contents

Chapter Forty-Four

Overview

Fenn’s Ox Trial tests understanding of utility, not brute strength. Neema wins by doing Fenn’s paperwork, embodying Ox harmony through role-fit, while Cain smartly uses actual oxen to move wagons. A tender moment over Shimmer’s sketch hints at Bersun’s possible involvement in her death, deepening political and personal stakes.

Summary

At the Ox farm, Fenn Fedala barred Neema’s guard from the Festival Trial and floored him when he resisted, signaling a no-nonsense ethos. Fenn pointed to surplus wagons and said, “Make yourselves useful,” starting a two-hour task without explicit instructions. Most contenders assumed they must haul the heavy loads themselves.

Havoc paired with Katsan, banking on Ox teamwork; Shal asked Cain to team up; Ruko pulled alone with grim resolve. Cain feigned a shoulder injury, then slipped away. Neema questioned the premise, noting Fenn’s weariness with paperwork and his broader message about utility and fit within a team.

Neema abandoned the wagons, entered Fenn’s office, and tackled his chaotic correspondence, blueprints, and accounts—answering Raven palace queries and organizing instructions. She recognized Ox philosophy as varied roles serving a common aim. Finding a sketch of Fenn and Shimmer, Neema and Fenn shared a fraught memory; Neema inferred Shimmer may have seen something off about Bersun, hinting at darker possibilities surrounding her death.

Outside, Cain returned leading oxen and quickly moved three full wagons, while a shattered Ruko bowed his head. Fenn declared Neema the winner as the only contender who understood the Trial’s intent; he credited Cain’s resourcefulness next, then awarded points based on wagon-pulling. Shal accepted the lesson with grace as Fenn dismissed them from the farm.

Who Appears

  • Neema
    Raven contender; interprets the Trial’s ethos, organizes Fenn’s paperwork, wins; senses Shimmer’s insight and suspects Bersun.
  • Fenn Fedala
    Ox High Engineer; sets a utility-based Trial, punches Neema’s guard, mourns Shimmer, praises/berates contenders and awards points.
  • Cain
    Fox contender; fakes injury, secures oxen to haul wagons efficiently, earns second place and praise for partial understanding.
  • Ruko
    Contender who hauls alone with grit; ultimately outmatched by oxen and philosophy, bows in defeat; receives points for effort.
  • Havoc
    Monkey contender; teams with Katsan to pull wagons, complains at Fenn’s scolding, earns shared minor points.
  • Katsan
    Contender who collaborates with Havoc on wagon-pulling; earns shared minor points.
  • Shal Worthy
    Hound contender; accepts defeat with dignity and salutes Fenn’s lesson.
  • Tala
    Excluded from the Trial; observes, exchanges a private joke with Fenn, comments on Havoc’s bellow.
  • Sol
    Raven spirit voice guiding Neema; approves her non-wagon strategy, briefly banters about prizes.
  • Shimmer
    Deceased friend of Fenn; her sketch triggers grief and suspicion about Bersun’s role in her death.
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