Cover of It Could Have Been Her

It Could Have Been Her

by Lisa Jewell


Genre
Mystery, Thriller, Suspense, Crime
Pages
384
Contents

Chapter Twenty-Two

Overview

Naomi moves into Allen and Annie’s home as an au pair and immediately senses an exploitative setup. Jessamine warns Naomi about her strict mother, a sacked predecessor, and lack of freedom. Allen sets onerous housework expectations, signaling control and boundary crossing that define Naomi’s role and the household’s dynamics.

Summary

Naomi is given a small attic room in Allen and Annie’s house, grateful to escape her previous lodging despite sensing the household’s tensions. She decorates with her few belongings and quickly reads the power dynamics, believing she is there to service Allen, tidy the house, and feed the children.

Jessamine, about twelve or thirteen, visits Naomi, confessing that the last au pair, Sandra, was sacked for being “too fun” after a prank about ear piercing angered Annie. Jessamine advises Naomi to avoid being fun, to ignore her odd clown-obsessed brother, and to follow Annie’s rules while keeping out of Annie’s way.

When Naomi asks about using the family computer for study, Jessamine says their parents forbid it and warns that the workload will leave no time for studying. Jessamine admits she is not supposed to talk to Naomi, underscoring the household’s strict controls.

Allen arrives and, with a small smile, outlines Naomi’s duties: laundry first, then floors, contradicting the “light housework” Naomi expected of an au pair. His crisp directives confirm the imbalance of power and the household’s exploitative expectations for Naomi’s role.

Who Appears

  • Naomi
    New au pair; recognizes exploitative dynamics; seeks stability and options; assigned heavy housework by Allen.
  • Jessamine
    Daughter; warns Naomi about strict rules, sacked au pair Sandra, and lack of freedom or study time.
  • Allen
    Father; subtly controlling; sets onerous chores and redefines au pair role beyond light housework.
  • Annie
    Mother; strict, disapproves of ‘fun’; previously sacked Sandra; exerting control via house rules.
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