Cover of The Intruder

The Intruder

by Freida McFadden


Genre
Thriller, Suspense, Mystery
Year
2025
Pages
304
Contents

Chapter 10

Overview

In a BEFORE chapter from Ella’s perspective, she is bullied in the school cafeteria but fires back with a cutting retort. Her isolation, poverty, and a broken washer deepen her shame and social stigma. Struggling academically, she envies a top student and escapes into fantasies about a caring, unknown father. The vignette reveals formative wounds and longing that shape Ella’s motivations.

Summary

In the school cafeteria, Ella is mocked by Anton Peterson, who calls her “Smella” and taunts her about hygiene and her body. Ella refuses to be cowed and humiliates Anton with a sharp comeback, then retreats to eat alone, wary he might retaliate.

Ella reflects on why she may smell: their washer has been broken for nearly a year, her mother won’t allow repair people inside, and money is tight. Without funds for the distant laundromat, Ella rewears clothes and tries to air them out. Her lunch—a stale turkey sandwich—reflects strict household rules about not discarding food unless packaging “puffs” from spoilage.

Nearby, Brittany Carter and friends giggle while Ella tries to ignore them. Ella studies her returned English essay with a D; although Mrs. Hecker promised extra credit for corrections, the criticism is vague, and Ella doesn’t know how to improve it.

Seeing Brittany’s A-plus deepens Ella’s feelings of inferiority and difference. The contrast in support and stability at home becomes stark in Ella’s mind.

To cope, Ella imagines the father her mother refuses to identify: a kind, respectable man who would welcome her and offer a better life. This fantasy underscores Ella’s isolation and yearning for rescue from her circumstances.

Who Appears

  • Ella
    Bullied student narrator; eats alone, rewears unwashed clothes, struggles academically, and fantasizes about an unknown father.
  • Anton Peterson
    Cafeteria bully who mocks Ella’s hygiene; is embarrassed by her sharp retort.
  • Brittany Carter
    Classmate with an A-plus essay; giggles with friends, highlighting Ella’s social and academic contrast.
  • Mrs. Hecker
    English teacher who offers extra points to revise Ella’s essay but gives unclear guidance.
  • Ella’s mother
    Off-page; refuses repair visits, leading to a broken washer and strict rules about keeping food.
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