Our Perfect Storm
by Carley Fortune
Contents
Chapter Thirty-Three
Overview
Frankie and George spend the day trying to act normal after their kiss, but the tension between them only deepens. A hard conversation about Frankie’s mother and George’s damaged relationship with his father brings them into greater emotional honesty, while Frankie begins to see that resisting her feelings may cost her more than admitting them. By the end of the chapter, she takes a first direct step toward a possible future with George by asking whether "us" might not be a bad idea after all.
Summary
Back at the resort after the rainforest, Frankie and George are still charged by their kiss, but both try to keep their distance. Frankie flees toward the idea of the hot tub alone, and the mood shifts completely when her mother, Rebecca, calls. George speaks easily with Rebecca, which leaves Frankie feeling unsteady and defensive because their long-running conflict over her mother is exposed again.
After the call, George urges Frankie to stop pretending she is no longer angry. Frankie reflects on how Rebecca left for whale research when Frankie was a child, how deeply that abandonment marked her, and how she later punished her mother with cruelty and distance. George argues that Frankie cannot forgive Rebecca or build a real relationship with her unless they talk honestly about what happened.
That conversation leads Frankie to ask about George's own father. George admits he is working through Beau's failures in therapy and is trying not to live only from hurt, even while accepting the damage Beau caused after Lily's death. He also says talking about his mother is harder because it feels like losing her again. Their emotional closeness deepens when George says he wishes Lily could have met Frankie, and Frankie answers that she wishes the same.
Later, alone in the hot tub, Frankie lets herself consider that resisting George may be the real mistake. She recognizes that no one understands her better or makes her feel more fully herself, and she tells Aurora about the kiss. Aurora pushes Frankie to admit the depth of her feelings and challenges her to imagine a future where George means even more than friendship.
Trying to regain control, Frankie spends the afternoon foraging berries, shopping for local seafood, and cooking dinner. The process reminds her of her creative instincts and of the long history she and George have built together through shared meals. When she photographs the finished dish, she starts a private album called MINE instead of sending it to Brie, marking a small but meaningful turn toward claiming something for herself.
Frankie and George eat, walk the foggy beach, and read together in strained but intimate silence, both clearly unable to forget the kiss. When George decides to sleep on the couch, Frankie is suddenly hit by the thought that their trip is ending and that she does not want to return to emotional distance. Before going upstairs, she finally risks saying what she has been circling all day and asks George, "What if" us is not a bad idea.
Who Appears
- FrankieProtagonist; confronts buried anger toward her mother, confesses the kiss to Aurora, and tentatively proposes a future with George.
- GeorgeFrankie’s closest friend and love interest; pushes her toward honesty, shares therapy insights, and grows closer to her.
- RebeccaFrankie’s mother; her phone call and past absence reignite Frankie’s unresolved hurt and guilt.
- AuroraFrankie’s friend; reacts excitedly to the kiss and encourages Frankie to stop minimizing her feelings.
- BeauGeorge’s father; discussed as the source of George’s lasting hurt and ongoing work in therapy.
- LilyGeorge’s late mother; remembered with grief as George speaks about how hard it is to discuss her.