Cover of Mad Mabel

Mad Mabel

by Sally Hepworth


Genre
Mystery, Suspense, Contemporary
Year
2025
Pages
352
Contents

Chapter 12

Overview

Elsie spots a menacing stranger searching Kenny Lane for a woman named Roxanne who has a young daughter. Persephone hides inside the targeted house as Elsie and Peter stall the man, who introduces himself as Shane, until he leaves. The encounter raises fears and suggests Persephone may be concealing her identity.

Summary

Elsie tries to shake Persephone when she notices a well-dressed, ominous man loitering at the mouth of Kenny Lane. He fits the stereotype of trouble, heightening Elsie’s unease since neighbors may know her secret. As he advances, Persephone slips into the neighboring rental and hides.

When the man asks for Roxanne, Elsie denies anyone by that name lives there and lists the street’s residents, omitting the rental occupants. Peter watches from his porch, ready to intervene.

The man describes Roxanne as a young woman with a six-year-old daughter. Elsie again insists there are no children on the street. Persephone peeks from the window, clearly avoiding notice.

Peter steps in to support Elsie, warning the man that the nearby police could arrive quickly. Joan returns to the lane with a younger man, adding to the audience and tension.

Before leaving, the stranger identifies himself indirectly, saying to tell Roxanne that Shane is looking for her. Elsie and Peter trail him to ensure he’s gone, then note that Persephone has vanished from the window, deepening suspicions that Persephone may, in fact, be Roxanne—or connected to her—and is hiding from Shane.

Who Appears

  • Elsie Mabel Fitzpatrick
    Elderly narrator; confronts a suspicious man, denies knowing Roxanne, and helps protect Persephone by deflecting him.
  • Persephone
    Hides inside the rental when a man searches for Roxanne; watches from the window, suggesting she may be linked to Roxanne.
  • Shane
    Menacing visitor seeking Roxanne, a young woman with a six-year-old; leaves after being challenged.
  • Peter
    Neighbor who backs Elsie, warns about nearby police presence, and helps usher the stranger away.
  • Joan
    Neighbor whose arrival with a younger man coincides with the stranger’s decision to leave.
  • Roxanne
    Woman sought by Shane; identity unclear, possibly connected to Persephone and the rental house.
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