Cover of Mad Mabel

Mad Mabel

by Sally Hepworth


Genre
Mystery, Suspense, Contemporary
Year
2025
Pages
352
Contents

Chapter 16

Overview

Elsie, exhausted after a shoe-shopping trip with Daphne, confronts her growing frailty. The next morning, Persephone barges in demanding food and nearly enters Elsie’s closed second bedroom, triggering Elsie’s sharp rebuke. Persephone flees in tears, underscoring Elsie’s guarded grief and rising tension with the neighbors.

Summary

Elsie and Daphne take the bus to buy shoes, with Daphne pushing her to choose burgundy. The short outing leaves Elsie drained, forcing her to confront how ordinary errands now exhaust her.

The next morning, Persephone knocks and pushes into Elsie’s house, declaring she is hungry. Persephone raids the kitchen, dismisses the apples, pockets arrowroot biscuits, and suggests Elsie bake banana bread for afternoon tea, while Roxanne remains absent and school start time looms.

As Elsie considers baking with overripe bananas, she realizes Persephone hasn’t left. Elsie finds Persephone peering into the second bedroom. Startled and upset, Elsie sharply orders Persephone out and slams the door, revealing how fiercely she guards whatever grief is stored there.

Shamed and near tears, Persephone apologizes and runs off with the biscuits. Elsie is left shaken, her privacy reasserted but at the cost of frightening a child and exposing the depth of her unresolved sorrow.

Who Appears

  • Elsie
    Elderly narrator; exhausted by a short shopping trip; fiercely protects a secret second bedroom; snaps at Persephone.
  • Persephone
    Hungry, intrusive child; raids Elsie’s kitchen, asks for banana bread; nearly snoops into a forbidden room; flees in tears.
  • Daphne
    Friend and shopping companion; nudges Elsie to buy burgundy shoes; also worn out by the outing.
  • Roxanne
    Persephone’s mother; absent and sleeping while Persephone intrudes on Elsie before school.
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