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Mad Mabel

by Sally Hepworth


Genre
Mystery, Suspense, Contemporary
Year
2025
Pages
352
Contents

Chapter 65

Overview

Mabel and Daphne stake out Susan’s home and witness Mabel’s father fail to catch Amelia from a tree, then coldly blame the child. Susan comforts Amelia while the father frets about dinner. Mabel recognizes his pattern of cruelty and understands his neglect was never about her.

Summary

After Cess receives a letter from Mabel’s father’s lawyer outlining plans for Rosehill and a new family, Mabel, anxious about Christos’s absence from school and reeling from her father’s schemes, rides with Daphne to clear her head and investigate.

They locate Susan’s bungalow using the parish directory and watch from across the street. Amelia plays high in a jacaranda tree. When Susan calls her in for dinner, Amelia hesitates at the final drop and calls for help.

Mabel’s father emerges. Standing beneath the branch, he extends his arms but, when Amelia slides, he does not catch her. Amelia falls, cries in pain, and clutches her arm. He tells her to stop making a fuss and blames her for jumping.

Susan rushes out, soothes Amelia, and suspects her arm may be broken, while Mabel’s father asks about dinner. The scene mirrors Mabel’s childhood: his irritation at helplessness, the dismissal of harm, and a partner cushioning his cruelty.

Riding home in silence, Mabel processes what she witnessed. Any hope or fear of being replaced dissolves into clarity: her father’s coldness is habitual and targeted at the vulnerable. Mabel concludes he is a monster—and that his lack of love was never about her.

Who Appears

  • Mabel (Elsie)
    Teen narrator; stakes out her father’s new family, witnesses his cruelty, and recognizes his neglect wasn’t about her.
  • Mabel’s father
    Fails to catch Amelia from a tree, blames her, shows indifference, confirming a pattern of coldness.
  • Daphne
    Mabel’s friend and companion on the ride; provides quiet support while Mabel processes.
  • Susan
    Mabel’s father’s fiancée; comforts injured Amelia and prioritizes her care.
  • Amelia
    Susan’s daughter; falls from a tree when Mabel’s father doesn’t catch her, likely injuring her arm.
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