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Book Four: The Trap — 17.
Overview
Colin receives prophetic visions foretelling multiple friends’ deaths and parallel futures of his own success. Elwood Hondo calls from the Long Dark, tempting Colin to summon King Sorrow by sending smoke signals. Though wary, Colin yields and smokes, effectively marking his location and aligning himself with Sorrow’s approach.
Summary
Colin gazes into Wolf Messing’s water-filled helmet and sees not himself but Corporal Elwood Hondo, whose leering image signals an intrusion from the Long Dark. Around him, the house hums with ordinary motion—Allison at the piano, the twins playing cards, Arthur stalking a dark figure in the snowy night—while fate presses in.
The helmet becomes a cracked silver hand mirror from a murdered princess, its Y-shaped fracture showing split futures. On one side, Donovan flings himself into darkness; on the other, Arthur is skewered by a blade. The visions shift: Donna crushed in rubble, Allison buried beneath falling stone, and Gwen Underfoot bleeding as a serpent’s tongue tastes her life. Colin, horrified, looks away and back again to see himself lauded on Forbes and honored with a Nobel-like medal, hinting at grand destinies bought at staggering costs.
The conch from his grandfather’s collection rings like a phone, and Hondo speaks, urging Colin to accept that everyone dies but that some deaths are beautiful—sacrifices for a greater good. Hondo flatters Colin’s pain and ambition, promising protection, justice, and power beside King Sorrow if Colin will only lead Sorrow to him. Colin recognizes the rot in talk of stopping the “undeserving,” yet he is drunk, high, and shaken by the image of Arthur impaled.
Pressed for a sign, Hondo instructs him to send “smoke signals” so Sorrow can find him. Inside, Allison hammers “Puff the Magic Dragon,” Gwen strips pins from dead butterflies, and Arthur keeps hunting the distant silhouette. Outside in the bitter air, Colin packs his bong, lights it, and exhales rings toward the dark sky.
By choosing to smoke, Colin opens a path for King Sorrow, edging himself from fear and doubt toward complicity, even as his friends’ foreshadowed deaths hang over the night.
Who Appears
- Colin WrenProtagonist; witnesses split-future visions, receives Hondo’s temptation, and sends smoke signals to draw King Sorrow.
- Elwood HondoDead killer speaking via conch; flatters and coerces Colin to summon King Sorrow with smoke.
- ArthurStalks a dark figure in the snow; seen in visions being run through with a blade.
- Gwen UnderfootSeen dying in a vision, blood tasted by a serpent; removes pins from butterflies inside.
- Allison (Allie)Pounds the piano with “Puff the Magic Dragon,” blood on keys; appears buried in a vision.
- DonnaAppears crushed in a vision beneath rock and books.
- Donovan (Van)Plays cards; in a vision, tips himself into darkness from a stairwell.
- King SorrowOffstage sovereign; Hondo urges Colin to summon him with smoke signals.
- Wolf MessingHis water-filled helmet serves as Colin’s first scrying surface before becoming a mirror.